episode one


Planet elderel four
The transporter beam emurged. The away team emurged on the serface. The team leader tapped on the com badge. “Picard to stargazer! “Picard said.
“No response!”jack crusher said. A large projectile came at the team. Picard pushed jack out of the way. Picard was hit by a phaser. Picard was hit. Picard with his last ounch of breath fired on the sniper. The shiper was hit. Another sniper struck picard. Picard died instently.
Crusher and the rest of the team hit the attackers. Jack feared that they would all suffer the same fate as his friend jean luc. He would not let that happen . No more,He thought to himself. He would not let anyone else die today. At least not on his watch.
Jack knew that they had to get passed the jamming device. He did not know how. The team fired on the attackers. The attackers were determined to bring down the team. Jack would not let them. They would not go down,not like this.
The team kept on. They fired there phasers. Suddenly the stargazer apeared in the sky. “Away team!we stil can’t lock on to your signal. We are trying! “The actimg captain said. “We will try to hold on until then!”jack said. The stargazer fired on the serface hoping to convince the enemy forces to standown. The stargazer tried to avoid serious fire.  they wanted to avoid injuries on both sides. The team had to get back to  the ship in one peace.
The team tried to move to a safe distence. They hid near a rock face. The stargazer kept mantaninting fire.
“Sir! I believe i have located the source of the dampening field!”one of the team members said. He informed jack where it was. The rest of the team covered him. Jack went and fired on the necklace of the enemy leader. The neclace was hit.
The team was beamed back to the ship. The stargazer went to warp.
Lavere france
The recovering jack crusher went to the door of the ansesteral home of picard. Robert picard answered the door. ” Mr. Picard. I regret to inform that your brother jean luc is dead. “Jack said. “Can i see him?”robert said.
Jack escorted robert to the mougue. “You don’t have to do.this!”jack said.”yes i do!”robert said. He brought him to picard. The blanket was removed from his head. Robert was in shock.
“Its funy,we were not that close. We really never had been. I regret that he is dead. I fugured.we evenualy work things out. Now i gues that wont happen !”he said.
“I am sory for your loss!”jack said.”you maried!”she asked.”yes i am! ! “He said. “Do you have children ?”he asked. “A son! “He said. “He would not consider his sacrifice a veign one!”robert said.
“It does not make it any better!” Jack said. “Understanible. Live a long productive life!make his sacrifice count! “Robert admonished him. “I will! I sware it'”he said. ” I wish you all the best lt. Commander crusher!”robert said. ” and you mr. Picard!”he said. With that they departed.
End of part one


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